Thursday, March 8, 2007

TOEFL

Out Line

Topic Sentence: TOEFL has three positive advantage tests for international students.
Topic: TOEFL
Controlling Idea: Has three positive advantage test for international students.

  1. First Supporting Idea: Improve English language.
    Details/Examples: Aware and understand the standards of English.
    e.g. reading, grammar & writing, and listening & speaking.
  2. Second Supporting Idea: Give chance to enter any foreign English university.
    Details/Examples: In the U.S and Europe.
  3. Third Supporting Idea: learn a new skills.
    Details/ Examples: How to be fast to give the information. Like, speaking and writing.



1 comment:

Derek said...

Sawson,

Your support is directly related to your topic, so your paragraph is unified and coherent. I would like you to think about a concluding sentence that works as a transition into your next paragraph. We will expand this after break.

Thanks and have a great break!

Monday 3/19: Webex at 10:00